On the final page, the tones are a lot better balanced through each panel to indicate a better balance within the lives of the two characters. The last panel shows their city on the moon again, but this time they are part of the scene (inside a tiny window in one of the buildings), rather than visually distanced by being distinct, as an indication that they are starting to acclimate a little bit.
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